Sarah+Morrill

What do you think of when you hear the word Tolerance? Maybe you think of the definition, or a person that comes to mind, or maybe just an event. What ever it is tolerance is very important to everyday life. Tolerance is the ability or willingness to tolerate something, in particular the existence of opinions or behavior that one does not necessarily agree with. __So__ this could be used everywhere you are whether it be school, home, job, or any other place. You use it in many ways in everyplace you can think of. It is important so you don’t snap and get mad and yell or even beat the crap out of the person the you should have tolerated but you really didn’t know the tolerance is very important to know and learn. So make sure you are tolerant of the right things and not of the really bad things. __ When at school can you use tolerance __ ? Why yes you can. If there is lets say this kid who is always being loud but the teacher doesn’t yell at them or talk to them about it because you are supposed to be talking to your table mates and the teacher doesn’t think that kid is being to loud then all you can do is tolerate it or you could try to get them to quiet down but if they don’t all you can do is tolerate it. Maybe there is this person there who is like this really mean person but non of the adults there catch him/her and they think your lying and you already ask the bully to quit then all you can do is tolerate it. Even if it is just some work that the teachers make you do you can complain about it and all that but they wont listen to you so all you can do is tolerate it. __So__ in school tolerance can be used. __ If you at home could tolerance be used? __ That is another yes. It may be used in different ways but you still use it. Maybe a little brother or sister is like crying because they hurt their finger or something. What can you do? You can yell at them to shut up, hit them, or help them. If you are helping them you need tolerance, right? Yes, you are wishing they would just shut up and leave you alone but instead you help them and tell them that it is okay and maybe kiss their finger and hold them in your arms. Tolerance can actually make things like that stop faster. __ Tolerance in the public, could that work? __ Actually yes that works to. So you are in the store or something with your mom. She is on the phone with her friend and she is walking and she is not even thinking and she is being a little louder then you would like and there is no way to tell her to be quiet or anything. __So__ what do you do now? Well i suppose you could walk away and act like you don’t know her or you can tolerate it. If you tolerate it then maybe the talking wont sound as loud to you anymore and you wont have any problem. Maybe your in a restaurant and your little brother or sister drops their food or spills their drink. __Embarrassing right?__ Well what if your mom did that you would be really embarrassed but you are sitting with her and everyone knows your related to her so you have to tolerate the looks from them. __So do you think tolerance is important now__ ? if you don’t you will find out very soon that it is. Like i said it is very important to everyday life. You don’t know if you use tolerance? How do you know if you use it or not? Well do you ever get dirty looks from people when your out and about with a friend and you don’t know why? Well if they are looking at you and the person your with and you don’t know why then you are tolerating what that other person is doing. This is very important to know and learn from so do it as soon as possible and the younger the better. Tolerance is very important USE IT!

Your essay is okey, but the words are not very exciting like for paragraph #3 you could change hurt to painful, sore or tender Or in paragraph #4 instead of loud you could use sore, noisey or dethning sounds