Geordan+Blowers

Tolerance __Their are many ways to talk, have, or show tolerance.__ Tolerance means to have the ability or willingness tolerate something. So over the years their has been many signs of tolerance like with school. Another is Hitler and the jews. **Finally the last one is pain**.

__School has to be the biggest one with showing tolerance.__ Every day the teachers have to listen to the student complain and all of the time. Students always have to get up early in the morning. When you are the oldest in th**e school little kids** get really annoying. __Hitler and the **jews** showed tolerance in many ways.__ The **jews** showed tolerance by not just going around and trying to kill Hitler. The **jews** also showed tolerance by dealing with all of the dumb stuff Hitler was doing to them. Finally they dealt with their parents and everybody was getting killed.

__I have to say the best kind of tolerance is when **your in** pain.__ When **your** in **pain you** have no choice to deal with it(kind of). So if your in **pain you** kind of have to be tolerant because you have to wait **till** your pills start to work. If you’ve been in excruciating pain you know how to be tolerant.

You can talk, show, or have tolerance.

3. I'm not sure of your third supporting detail i n paragraph #3 (Hitler). 4th paragraph (pain) needs one more supporting detail. Plus two of your supporting details sound alike. 4. Try to vary the length of your sentences. 5. Your conclusion needs more than one sentence.