Joshua+Waychoff

Tolerance

__My family, the police, and I are have different ways that we deal with being tolerant__. My dad has to be tolerant of many people. The police are very tolerant in their jobs. I have to show tolerance and acceptance at school and at home. __My dad shows tolerance with his work because he has to be foreman__. Some of the ways my dad are tolerant is he has to put up with his workers complaining. My dad go’s to work every morning to hear his workers complain about the summer heat or the winter cold. My dad comes home every day mad cause his workers aren’t doing their jobs and that anger comes out on someone or something (me). __The police show tolerance in many different ways__. One big way is thieves. The police deal with thieves when they take something from the store without paying for it. The police have to put up with the thieves well giving them their ride to the station. The local police force has to put up with the local thieves and that is usually a lot. __I have to deal with tolerance in many ways__. One big way is friends. My friends can be cool at times but it’s the times they are jerks or rude that get me going. I have many friends some are the coolest and others are okay. The ones that are okay get on my nerves with rude comments or talking behind my back. I tolerate my friends most when they are messing around and being stupid it gets under my skin . There are many ways you can write about tolerance this was just one way. __In this essay i covered some of the main parts of life tolerance__. My dad dealing with his job big example. The police dealing with thieves another big example. The last thing was me dealing with friends thats a big big example cause you have to deal with friends all your life.

4. You need to have a better word choice. Use a wider word choice, and you could make your sentence a little long by using more details or examples.