Devon+DiGiacomo

Tolerance

__You need tolerance to get through life.__ If people didn’t have tolerance a lot of people would be stressed or they would just be like a zombie. You need tolerance in sports, with family, and preps. Tolerance is a every day thing. __I need tolerance in sports because they can get intense.__ Like when in football you have to remember the plays. Like for example I play TE (Tight End.) When I play TE I have to remember the play if I am blocking or going for a pass. Ok like the Trips Left QB keep. I have to remember what rote I am running. Then on Defense I have to remember plays. Like the shade left cover 2. This (is) where I shift to the left and act like I am going back in coverage, then I blitz and try to tackle them in the backfield. I play DE (Defensive End.) Ah step - __family this is the one I need to have the most tolerance.__ My step - brother he is 4 moths younger than me. He is very cocky any more last year he never was cocky. Know like he thinks he is cool to hit me all the time so then I hit him because I run out of tolerance with this kid. Then my step - sister is 15 and a freshman at Saint Joe High School. She thinks she is old enough to yell at her mom. __Then for the preps like Marissa.__ She is like the biggest prep in our grade. She thinks she is so much better than me. She needs to learn that I am one of the most popular kids in our grade. She needs to be slapped. Like all the preps need to. __If you didn’t know what this essay about. There is some thing wrong with you.__ It was tolerance. Tolerance is needed in jobs like teaching and any thing. Then you need tolerance in sports because you have to remember the plays. I hope you enjoyed this essay thank you.

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