Cheyanne+Brown

Tolerance

__Tolerance when you deal with tolerance you deal with a lot.__ Like me I deal with my brother an school, an My by-polar Uncle. At school you have to worry about your grades so that you parents are not mad at you. An then you a have a by-polar uncle that lived for you. An he is always hounding you an you gave your bed room for him to live there. He has his own room that is mine! An on top of that you have a brother that is alway crying about something he did by I get in trouble for. I have a lot of Tolerance!!!!

__My brother, he always cries when he wants something an when he cries I think my mom gives in to make him shut up.__ An he is always blaming things on me when he is the real person that did the problem. An when he does something that he knows that he is not aloud to do he blames it on me. I get in trouble for things that he does. Like drinking in the living room an he blames it on me when my mom gets home like 15 minutes after we do an he blames me for having a drink in the living room. Every day he does this to me an he laughing at me when my mom walks away taking the drink into the kitchen. That is some Tolerance with my brother.

__School, I have school in 8th grade an the 8 grade is harder for me math wise.__ Well I got an E on my report card an my mom got the mail that day an she got there before I did that one day that my report card an she seen the E. I though I was going to be dead by morning! I got a talking to about how important it is to get you grades higher an that grades are a big important part of life. An that grades can depend on the type if job I will get when I get older an that she wants this to happen an that if the don’t go up then I will be grounded from everything phone,friends,enter net,everything! An homework is another thing for math! Almost every night I have homework for math from Mr. Easto it is really annoying. But every single night home work for math EVERY SINGLE NIGHT!!!! Plus any other class homework.

__Dealing with a by-polar Uncle can be very stressful.__  Every single time you look at something wrong you hear “Don’t Do That!.” An my mom let me live with us for almost three week at our house. An all he does is smoke so the house is smoky when you would come home from school you would walk in from outside an he would say “You are late what happened?” An then I would say “We had to pick up someone from school that missed the bus is that OKay?” Then he would stop talking for a minute or two. Then he would get really mad at me after a minute an go to my room. Then after he goes to my room I would go get something an then he would say “Why are you in here I am Trying to SLEEP!” Then I would leave my own room for him. An the day he moved out I will never forget it. He found a friend that can now live with his By-Polarness.

__Now as you can see how hard it is to deal with school, family members,friends,Uncles (By-Polar to make it twice as hard), teachers an all of that to me means tolerance.__  An  everything can turn to tolerance an become hard to handle but when you handle something hard it becomes tolerance an when it is tolerance it can mean you don’t like to do but you do it any ways like put up with a By-Polar Uncle not something you want to do but you do it anyways.

1. I like how you used the word, "Bipolarness" at then end, even though it isn't a word. 2. I like how you explained what your brother does to you when you get into trouble from him. 3. I really liked how in the beginning when you wrote that your mom would give your brother whatever he wanted to make him SHUT UP! 4. Just change the word "an " to **AND//.//** 5.