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Will Langdon Jan. 29th, 2009 English 5th

Tolerance __There were many times in history where tolerance took place.__ One of these times was with the KKK. Another way was with Hitler & the Jews. The other way was with the Japanese during World War 2. Tolerance took place many times in history. __One time this took place was with the KKK.__ The KKK were tolerant of the laws that the government set up. Another way was because they couldn’t stand blacks other races. The final reason why they were tolerant was because they couldn’t stand the growing cities. So overall the KKK were tolerant over many things. __Another time tolerance took place in history was with Hitler & the Jews.__ One way he was tolerant was when he captured some of them, he would either kill them if they didn’t do as he said. Another way Hitler was tolerant was by sending the Jews to camps if he didn’t need to kill them. But while the Jews were at the camps, most of them died due to starvation. After he killed over 1,000 Jews he commit suicide. __The final time tolerance took place in history was with the Japanese during WWII.__ One way they were tolerant was because the didn’t want other countries to have oil. The reason why they needed the oil was to fuel their empire. Then the also bombed Pearl Harbor so that the U.S. Couldn’t fight on the open water during the war. The final way they had a treaty with Hitler & the German army. There were many times that the Japanese were tolerant. There were many times that there was tolerance in history. One way was with the KKK. The other way was with Hitler & the Jews. The final way with the Japanese & other countries. __Tolerance took place many times in history.__

You could use bigger more interesting words. But you had good sentence lengths and types.