Lindsey+Fisk

**__ Have you ever been on a team that thinks they’re better than you or had to tolerate a younger sister or even friends that annoy you to death__. I have gone through all of these but without tolerating them first I’d probably be in lots of trouble.** **__ It all started last year last year at the 1st soccer game.__ Lilly, Elli, Brii, Saralyn, Cayleah, and I were all out to start. Elli and I were accidentally in the wrong spots and the people waiting to go in (also known as the “Im better than you” type of people) were freaking out on us. I felt really bad and wanted to cry. So did Elli. They practically told me that I wasn’t good enough and that I should just quit. Still everyday I tolerated them, not saying anything back when they had stupid comments for me and my friends. Also during this time I had to tolerate the coach not listening to what I had to say about what was going on. Thanks to the “mean girls” playing soccer we had no team what so ever. Which made us loose every game. ** ** __Another thing that I think almost everyone has to tolerate is brothers and sisters.__ They always go around saying annoying things or they try to find new ways to get you in trouble. If I didn’t ever tolerate my sister or brother they would probably never talk to me again because I would always be yelling at them. Also, even though I hate to admit it, they have to tolerate us too. We might yell at them for dumb things if we are mad at them or just do things to annoy them too. ** ** __Last but, defiantly not least is friends.__ Some friends get really annoying sometimes. They always like smack you and pinch you and stuff but, sometimes I just have to tolerate it. If I didn’t then I would probably do to them whatever they did to me but just ten times harder. They would probably hate me after I did it too, which is why I tolerate them. Also if I didn’t tolerate them Id have like zero friends let cause they would all leave me. ** ** Without tolerance I would not have been able to get through any of these things without loosing someone or even something.**
 * Team Tolerance**

The relevant details for the 4th paragraph you need like one or two more sentences backing your reason up though bu tthe rest of the details are pretty good.j