Scott+Alwood

Rough Draft For Tolerance
__Have you ever not shown tolerance toward someone when you know that you should have__? If you have then you’re just a normal person. Because throughout history a lot of famous people have either shown tolerance or haven’t. It’s not wrong to not show tolerance because throughout history it has become human nature. __ One famous person that has shown tolerance is Martin Luther King__. He was a great __african american__ rights activist. When he showed tolerance he was going against the a lot of people to stand up for his people. He just wouldn’t let them keep treating him differently from everyone else. A lot of white people disagreed with what he was trying to do and some still do today. Although some still object when he stood up he was able to make a change. __Another person that is famous because of their tolerance is Rosa Parks.__ She was another __african__ rights activist. She is best known for the Montgomery bus boycott. She was a black women who sat in the front of the bus when black people were supposed to be in the front. She was part of a long scheme that helped to get black people their right’s. She also teamed up with Martin Luther King and together they fought for and won black rights. __The last person that I think showed a lot of tolerance is Jackie Robinson.__ He was more of a pioneer for blacks in baseball then anyone else. He was the first black player to play and start in the major leagues for the Brooklyn Dodgers. He had many people that were against him playing but in the end he just wouldn’t take “no”. He led the way for black players in a lot of other sports to like football. __As you can see even if you don’t show tolerance that doesn’t make you a bad person.__ In the world we live in it just makes you normal. So next time when something is really bugging you just tolerate it. And look around you and see everyone else not able to tolerate something that is bugging them. 


 * 1) 4. She also teamed up with Martin Luther King and together they fought for and won black rights.
 * 2) 4. He had many people that were against him playing but in the end he just  wouldn’t take “no”
 * 3) 5 No i think that you need just a few more sentences