Dylan+Elliott

Tolerance

__Tolerance…__ __have you ever became intolerant with someone or with something you have been doing__ ? Or when someone is being mean to a certain group of people? I know I have.

__I am intolerant with the KKK(Ku Klux Klan) because there is no reason to hate a group of people because of the color of their skin or their religion__. They used to wander around cities looking for African Americans just to beat up for no good reason. They hated on blacks because of the color of their skin and they hated on Jews __B__ ecause of their religion and I think that that is really dumb because we are all people no matter what and no human being deserves to be treated like they did other than the people that did what they did. The KKK has a big record of terrorism,violence and lynching(mobbing or killing someone). They had 3 different klans, the 1st one had a population of 550,000, 2nd 4,000,000 which topped the charts, 3rd was 6,000.It was happening during WWI. They bombed the 16th Street baptist church and assassinated the organizer of NAACP Medgar Evers. What thy did was very wrong and every believer should be severely punished for their actions.

__I am very intolerant with Adolf Hitler__. He was the Fuhrer(President) of Germany. He was a WWI veteran. He joined the Nazi Party in 1920 and became it’s leader in 1921. He performed genocide of an estimated 6 million people of Jewish ethnically and other various groups of people. During the ending of the Holocaust he married his long-time mistress Eva Braun and less than 40 later the 2 committed suicide.

__I get intolerant when the refs in a football game make a completely bad call__. I get that way because that could be a game deciding game and for anyone knows the other team could be paying the refs to make bad calls like they had been making. When a ref makes a dumb call one maybe both teams become very intolerant at the ref because like I said before it could be game deciding. One time I was playing defensive back against homer and the quarter back through the ball to the man I was covering and the wide receiver tripped me and it was an obvious call and the ref didn’t call it, it wasn’t game deciding because it was only a five or six yard pass.

__Have you ever became very intolerant at on point or time in your life?__ Come on be honest we all have had those moments in our lifetime. When you do you want to do a certain action that is indescribable by any emotion. Well I have had many more of those moments other than the one is just told you about.

1. everything looks good 2. look up 3. in the second paragraph you need to have a topic sentence and explain after that. 4. I think that the text is good but you need to explain a little more and maybe it would make your essay longer 5. good 6. look up